A very nice piece, well, I liked it anyway. I especially loved the last two lines of stanzas one and three, because of the rhyme and the strength of the lines themselves. Nice wording.

Brad

Nice poem amazing job well done

Wow. O.o
That was an amazing ending, it ended with a POW! (: I adore this piece.

"Knowing everything about him yet he's now a total stranger
Been living in a fairyland unaware you're heading for danger"
- Oh dear, that was just so sad - this whole piece was sad and heartbreaking. It always hurts to lose a someone you love, and you portrayed this hurt beautifully.
The flow was smooth and your emotions were intense. Nicely done.

Phenominal job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5
--- Steph xx

Nice poem, with much depth and meaning