It had its good and its bad bits. I didn't like the 'skiddlydiddlydoo' bit, but I did like the line 'but remember, don't tell anyone, they might think you're a loon!'. I didn't like the last line, it seemed way too weak for me, and i think a poem should always end strong.

Brad

I thought this was very silly. hehe nice.

I disagree with "Bradley Peter" i LOVE the
skiddlydiddlydoo part it was cute and made me laugh!