Uh, hmm. The flow in this piece was a bit rocky here and there. And the repitition of
"There's tears that will fall, droplets to scorch,
times where the wasted will carry the torch." kind of threw me off while I was reading. .

"We need more in life than wh-r-es and transvestites,
and more than the cruelty that fills our delights"

those two lines had a lot of truth in it and i completely agree. anyway. twas a good write. :]