Comments : The day i almost died along with you

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    *rip grandpa ray*

    hugs for you, this poem was very good, heartfilled.
    well done hun xxxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Awww beautiful poems...sorry for your lose!
    My nanna passed away this yr and i felt exactly how you wrote! I smashed everything in my room I was a mess!
    Great poem!!
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by michelle

    I love it. it reminds me of my mom thatd died last year

  • 16 years ago

    by fallenangel

    Wow. There aren't words to express what that poem made me feel. I wish I could have put the death of my grandpa into words like that...but I was a little young to understand. Amazing.