You have wrote this very very well. its very good, keep this up xx

"This future is a hazy misconception,
because my world revolves around you,
and the choices in my life have limits -
i can't breathe happiness in all that I do."
That is such a beautiful stanza.
Very good, the words made up the subject easily, it just flowed.
5/5

Ireall like this poem and the emotion your a great writer and this is going in my favorites you should comment my poems

Another fantastic poem!