Wow, very powerful! like the last 2 lines of the poem the best, they put things in prespective 4 me. 5/5
xoxo
~me~

You wrought the words from my mind. perfect hun. 5/5

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Deeply and intense. Great beginning and great ending. You written it magnificently.

Keep writing!

^_^ 5/5

Well done i liek it xx