It was a really good poem. at first i was wondering why all the "j"s in "just" were capitalized but then i got to the end. it is really good. you put a nice emphasis on "just"

I can feel the flow, well done xxx

Original idea for the poem, I like atmosphere but you need some punctuation and I don't like using word-okay- in poetry.
Overall nice one but not my taste, I personally didn't enjoy too much but I like other type of poetry.

It does have it's own little flow, which is one reason why I like it, but it really doesn't make much sense and is confusing to read.
It's interesting in its own way though.
4/5
~gabriella

This poem is very well written, I can definitley relate! keep it up 5/5

I could truly feel the emotions you expressed in this piece and the only piece of advice I have is for you to try new words and expand on your poetry.