Nicely written, keep it up 5/5

A very beautiful piece of work, 5/5.

Brillant great job here

Nicely done 5/5

For i've realized that I,
Will give you all of my heart.
And if these became my words,
I'll love you with broken parts.

This is my favorite stanza, it's so sad...
You write really well, good flow and good choice of words!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid