Great job! That subject is always a great one to write about, but the most difficult! The rhyming was perfect and made a statement! Fantastic Job! i really enjoyed it!
~KT

That was cool, i loved that, it has a lot of meaning, Good JOB!

Nice job Cale

I thought this poem was good

Although not as strong as some of your other writes. But still good.

The topic intrests me. I find interesting that in the beginning i though all your poems were going to be about a boy searching for a girl

[Then it changed]

nice twist
5/5

I think that was a really great job...its very inpirational to ME...so great poem!!

Thats beautiful
great work!