Awwwww
This is sooooooo sweet!
I'm gonna cry! :)

Brilliant 5/5

So cute and lovely friendship poem
i always enjoy these kinds of poems
well done

"We could sit in an empty room
and still have the world at our feet
together we are brilliant
theres no one we cant defeat"

well said

Sweet poem
and the door thing is great
thanks for commenting on my poems as well
cheers
xx

Short sweet and very cute....
good work... :)

Aw, sweet lil poem;)
Wonderful dedication to friendship.
Thought this was lovely gave a real feeling of contentment.

Kelly
xx

We could sit in an empty room
and still have the world at our feet
^^^
I love your opening lines, they breathe life.

i tell you everything about me
and you listen to every word
^^^
The meaning of true friendship. The bond that holds friends together ... talking, learning, accepting and loving

You have penned a sweet, loving friendship poem for someone you truly appreciate as a friend.
Well done Cara
Luanne

Reallly good!! soo cute!
xoxo

Loved this poem too.
Has real meaning <3
Related to me, and also I liked the structure of the poem.
Keep it up.
Also 5/5

- Nicole xx

I appreciate your poem. It's a lovely one. Only thing you need to fix is the punctuation marks. That's what I think.
Overall it's good.

Very nice you got a lot said with few words, which i like.
A small punctuation mistake second last line, ( you're instead of your) otherwise a lovely poem once more that i think would have made the recipient very happy.

Grant