Very good poem =)
I really liked to flow in this one. Also the emotion was wonderful throughout the attire.

"Would you see my heart that's there
Right upon my sleeve
And just continue walking
As if you've not seen me"
^^my fav part

Overall, beautfully written
5/5

I loved it, it was wonderful
great job
5/5

I love this its great

I deff. love it

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