Well written but very sad sweet. 5/5

Its short but its good, well done xx

It was an okay poem, bt I'm a rhyming fan, a usually don't even read non-rhyming pieces, but yours was short, so I did. Even though this piece was short, it had a lot of power and emotion, good work.

Brad

Great job.just remeber that you are not on your own.
;) lesthat

I like this poem and can relate to being alone