Hahah, the playfulness of ur rhyme scheme was obvious and it radiated happiness. i like this poem.

Nice poem. Very unique and sweet.
It somehow, brings a smile to my face. It either could be happy or sad.

Very well poem, Gabby!

5.5

Nice poem. Very unique and sweet.
It somehow, brings a smile to my face. It either could be happy or sad.

Very well poem, Gabby!

5.5

Nice poem. Very unique and sweet.
It somehow, brings a smile to my face. It either could be happy or sad.

Very well poem, Gabby!

5.5