Comments : Love at first site

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    Feels like a song

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is beautiful, yeah I agree with Bryce. It sounds like a beautiful melody. Music within the heart. Very attractive piece. It grabs the readers attention. Very well write!

    5.5

    Sarah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Aw. its so cute.
    love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Aw. its so cute.
    love it