Comments : When will the days end?

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh sweetie, if this is just poetic justice than you're gifted...if this is your reality, I beg that you talk to someone other than this forum...that is a scary thing to deal w/, I'll keep you in my prayers girlie!! Keep using your mind as an outlet instead of your poor viens honey!

    Sarah

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    this poem takes a different style to most of your other writing, it was different but i still liked it. iv noticed you use really strong words and descriptions to really get your point across. itz good.

    xxoo,
    alysse

  • 19 years ago

    by Charlotte

    Great poem one I can relate to