Comments : Violin

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I saw her again,
    longing for my love,
    vivid dreams,
    of distant colors,
    makes me want to sing.
    => I like this part..it flows..

    sounds like a violin,
    with my voice so sore,
    maybe I'll get home,
    your being I adore.
    => You use funny way to describe your voice... :D

    so drink up your wine,
    and play your violin,
    oh darling you're so fine,
    it's true that love turns blind.
    =>I am laughing for the last 2 lines. You are so funny, aren't you..

    This is a nice poem.. I like this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    WOW! This is really good too...it's really sweet, and sounds sincere...if only some guy would direct something like this to me *sigh*, I'd pretty much ask him to marry me on the spot :P Of course, I fail at string instruments, it'd have to say flute :P
    Anyway, very good. You're good at getting into your characters. I look forward to more!

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is so good. LIke a voice of music.

    sounds like a violin,
    with my voice so sore,
    maybe I'll get home,
    your being I adore.

    This stanza was wonderful! [5.5]

    BEst wishes,

    SArah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Hey love, congrats for being on the best love poems list :) :) :)