I found your poem very haunting and it was quite heart breaking to read, this almost yearning willing your lover back. A truly beautiful poem. Suggested by Miss Take

Grant

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

Thanks for the comments on my poetry :]

i really like this poem as well.

good work :D

<3 ShaunaMarie

I really like this poem more than the sad poem. Probably because there isn't this sense of hopelessness. That even though times are not so good that it will be all right.

It seems the more people can relate to what you are saying the more they understand the emotion and feelings. This is a very good poem for that =)

"Oh, How I wish you could say"

I think you meant to type "stay" like in the first chorus. Just thought I would point that out =) 5/5 Very lovely piece.

What a beautiful poem! So filled with love and yearning....I love it!
I am going to add it to my favs now!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid