Ohhhh, love the ending very suspenseful.

great work keep this up xxx

Thanks!! =]

Wow VERY GOOD... as Pink said loved the ending really did keep me in suspense wondering what the tragedy was.... good choice of words to.. Fav part was the ending...

Hmm.. The tradegy was.. the girl died.. She was waiting for the time the guy would confess but it was too late because she was about to die.. Nyahaha.. I really love tragic stories!!

This poem absolutely amazing!
It had so much emotuin in it!
Very sad poem.
My girl went through somethin like this w/ herdf ex, but her ex got killed.
Good poem!
5/5

Aww D: Poor guy <3 I know the feeling :( I liked this poem it brings back a few close held memorys that mean the world to me ^_^ I liked it.

This is freakin AMAZING.... i love it... wow this poem was amazingly captivating... i had to read it more than once... 5/5