Rene your words portrayed a deep sense of love and feeling. They held my attention - Tony :)

Marvelous. A poem that speaks passion all in itself. And so clear to understand something that comes straight from the heart. I enjoyed it, it captured my imagination and my consideration. 5/5

Great poem
it made me thing of my boyfriend while i was reading it. great job capturing the emotion

Romance like never before, a blossom awaken in the wilderness, bee's and birds are creating a concert for lovers, waterfalls is making a deep sound, flowers are filling fregrance in the air like you are sending sweet words in my ears. Thanks for this Ole Carsten