Awwww....i loved this poem
im speechless i have no clue wat to say
except i freakin loved it
5/5
Amazing job!!!!

Wow!!..i like this!!.it's really good..and it reminds me of my poem "i want to be that girl".........lol.......great job...5/5
***aLy***

Awwwwwwwwwww..... this one made me cry justin.... awwwwwwwww that is so cute
mwa
XxBabyxX

I want to be the girl who would say: This poem is really nice!!
Nyahaha.. Keep up the good work!

Hey buddy..this one is sweet...very cute...shows the intimacy in your feeling...penned in a style of your own...save a few improvements...u can write to heights...keep it up!
Love,
Pooja

That is so sweet....

Cute 5/5

Love it! shes lucky!

SOooOoooO
cut3.

Wow its so cute & amazing...on a scale of 1-5 I give you a 10

Awww this is so cute it made my heart ache like it was sooo amazing! whoever made you wanna write this is the luckest girl in the world!

AWWW THATS SO CUTE!
LUVIN THE POEM

Omg that is so awesome lol id say awwwww but it looks like every other person did so n-e wayz good job i loved it!!!!

Awww,, its cute ((5))

Awwww =]
i love this! good job

AWW why cant my bf be as sweet as you !!!!!!

"special"

I do like this poem, it has great meaning and you've decscribed it all well. I do think the " I want to" could be taken out and only in the beginning of every 5 lines, then continuing on for 4 or so with commas. It fits the poem okay, but it just goes better when read allowed without them.

It is a wonderful p oem though, dear.
Keep it up.

Wooow wat can I say this was sooo amazinggg

The part
I want to be your jewelry,partner, your speacil bling
But the statement i long for the most is will you be my everything

Wow I love that part ^^
Just wow

100/100 from me babii(: