Awww, very dedicated indeed, i liked it, you put a lot of effort in, well done xx

Well you can write a good poem thats for sure. i like long poems it gives me an undetstand \ing of where eveyones coming frome. anyway im totally off subject, i liked your poem it was really good. :)

Your poem was really good i loved it...i understood it completely and you could feel the emotions behind the words, way cool =)

I love this poem!! It shows alot of emotion!
Great job!!