Wow. This is awesome. I am not really an expert about poetry, but just a beginner, I feel the flow was great. I enjoyed reading it. The message was good. I think you have a mature thinking way.

Awesome work, Sean. Keep on writing like this!

"Who are you?, Whats your purpose in this life?
If you try, could you ever overcome this strife?
Do you even know the name of your own soul?
Or is this an imagination that will never be whole?"
-First off, I love the title of this poem. It's amazing. This stanza fits the poem perfectly. It made me think about "who I am."

I love all the questions, they were great. It was like you were writing what you thought and wondered. Which was neat. And, I believe thats what you were doing. haha. Anyway, awesome work and it was one of those poems that actually made the reader think b/c the poem contained several questions, unique poem. i enjoyed. 5/5