Definitely deserving of the 5/5

Luanne,

I hope you will be very happy...saying these beautiful words will certainly add to the magic of the moment:)))
Beautiful poem, girlie...
Have a splendid wedding day, filled with laughter and joy.
Hugs you,

Ingrid

Oh wow!! this was so deep it touched me beyond words!!

"With this sign, as a commitment to our love
ring upon your finger, I promise this to you
throughout the good times and the bad
our love will always see us through

My twin soul, I join my life with you today
wipe clean the canvas of past tribulations
paint our new life with colors of beauty
share in unison our greatest expectations

I promise to alway comfort you in sadness
cherish the beautiful memories we create
and if I should go before you my love
wait for you at the garden of Heaven's gate"

With your words i feel the deep commitment you have made. A promise to be there for the good and bad is what a relationship is all about. I'm so happy to see the strength return in your relationship and this piece was a wonderful expression of that.

Luanne
This poem is wonderful and so heartfelt.

Forgiving mistakes, as we are human
within our hearts, hurt once tried to reign
leaving our souls lost and hollow
depth of our love, has overcome the pain

This stanza says so much about your character. So many times when people are in a relationship and something goes wrong they run. Instead of staying and working things out. Life is to short to throw away a love.

I promise to alway comfort you in sadness
cherish the beautiful memories we create
and if I should go before you my love
wait for you at the garden of Heaven's gate

This just touched me the most. I know it is because of things that have happened in my life. It just paints such a picture of peace and serinity for me.

God has given us a second chance
and from this day forward, I swear
for wherever the wind may carry us
it's a journey we both will share

Today I walked down this isle alone
but I will leave, forever by your side ...

This is a perfect ending. Just like things should be. Excellent job!
Love Cindy

^This one is so beautiful...perfect wedding day poem....I believe it captures those feelings held by those in love on that special day about to embark on a new journey together.

"My twin soul, I join my life with you today
wipe clean the canvas of past tribulations
paint our new life with colors of beauty
share in unison our greatest expectations"

^ I love this verse....two becoming one...forgetting all that has been and looking for a bright new future together! Great job Luanne...thanks for the entry!