This is simply amazing. This piece is definitely one of the most beautiful love poems I've read in a while, you created such captivating atmosphere within every greatly written line. This is very original write filled with an amount of superbly portrayed emotions. Heartfelt, truly beautiful poem, very intense. When I read it for the first time I thought I would be bothered by its structure, but you managed to keep flawless flow which highlights beauty and elegance of the whole poem.
I like your choice of words, too.

Amazingly done!