Comments : Losing Sight.

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...I like this poem. It's really good and heart felt. Love your poetry lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with Rex and blade, you have a good writing style and i like it. I have read your others works and this one fits in with them as always a good read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow! Amazingly written, so creative and emotional piece, you truly expressed your self on remarkable way. Intensively created atmosphere, I was honestly captured with this poem from first line and I think that you overall did fantastic job. Few lines truly impressed me, bravo!

  • 15 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I liked this peice, but I didn't love it. Do not take this personally, please, but I, myself, did not feel any emotion when reading this... it was just... "word word word comma word word word next paragraph word word word...etc." I feel you left out a lot that you shouldn't have thought twice about, maybe, more to this poem, you never brought to the page.? Well, The word flow is excellent, the rhyme scheme, a bit off, but still good. I loved how you repeated, "Lost Sight" in the first two stanzas. Very interesting.

    Keep it up sweety, and Thank you for your comment. Take Care <3