i loved it! i know it hurts to relive expeirencees but once you get them out on paper (or computer) its worth it and it gets some of the anger out! she didnt deserve you! keep your head high becuase u kick butt at poetry and all she can do is hurt people!
Thank you everyone for your comments. I hope you will read my poem "I Forgive You". It fills in alot of stuff that nobody knew, until now. And Again, Thank you. I would never have been here if it wasn't for everyone reading my poems.
Love lost is a horrible thing, but its almost been a year since you wrote this, and judging by your other poems, you have found another, and hopefully this one will stay for good =]. Love is, to say the least an amazing thing. GREAT poem, i can tell it came from the bottom of your heart.