Wow.. wow... lol.. I like it.. I could actually imagine every line nd seeing the world as it is.. nd its so true.. we do things just to fit in nd to make people like us for what we are not.. but so true.. 5/5..

This is good because it reflects what every teenager goes through, the insecurity the pain the confusion, the pressure to fit in.
Really good!

Good job hun, like your style xxx

This poem is sooo true loved it
5/5
Fantastic Job!!!

Really God, It shows they type of thinkgs teens go through daily or their emotiond they may have daily

Edit:
You mean pressure CAUSED by society. :)
You mean boy's. Apostrophe s shows ownership. Since it is HIS life, he owns it.
Under N, for the second line, you capitalized people, but you didn't start a new sentence so, lower case that. Also in the N, you're using the wrong they're. It's they're.

Response:
I thought it was pretty cool. Since there weren't any rhymes it was easy to grade, consistency wise. I'm starting to see a trend in some of your recent poems. :) Acrostic. Nice. They're so diverse.

Rating:
I thought it was a good poem. I'd give it a four. There wasn't anything wrong with it, it just wasn't the best poem ever and all that jazz. It was good though. High fives* :)