Great work xxx

I want you to know
That I tried everything else
To prevent this sin
Of killing myself-luv it
sad poem

I thought that this was pretty good. It's wasn't like "WOW" but it was pretty good. I was able 2 understand what u were writing and what u meant. But at the same time it seemed like something was missing. Idk. But it was still good

.:Rach:.

Well i though it was great keep up the great work..

Aw!..i culd really feel ur pain!!!

i liked it!..good job!,

<3 Aly

Wow... that was just shocking, the emotion you've put in it.. the emotion the reader recieves...
very impressing poem

Aww this was a very good written poem, i loved the flow and rhyming great work