Quickly now
Make a wish
That all thats broken
Can be fixed

i wish for a friend. who can fix my broken. POOF! and there we go!!!

i liked this..i've gotten used to more sentence like lines from you. this is a new, fresh style for the moment...love it.

Awww. wow, beautiful! i luv it! really took me from the heart. great job, really. 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Do u know how amazing this is??
i don't think u do!
WOW.

"Quickly now
Make a wish
That all thats broken
Can be fixed"

^this reminded me of how i always wish at 11:11. and i always wish for the bad things in my life to get better. to be fixed. i loved it and could relate to this in so many ways.

the flow of this was amazing and i liked the style. i'm also a big fan of this quote...

"Hearts will never be practical until they are made unbreakable."-Wizard of Oz

5/5!
(this is going in my favourites) :)

Awwwww cute xxx

I love your poems..it toched me yr poem is tight bro!