Comments : Broken ________

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    Quickly now
    Make a wish
    That all thats broken
    Can be fixed

    i wish for a friend. who can fix my broken. POOF! and there we go!!!

    i liked this..i've gotten used to more sentence like lines from you. this is a new, fresh style for the moment...love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Awww. wow, beautiful! i luv it! really took me from the heart. great job, really. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 15 years ago

    by RB

    Do u know how amazing this is??
    i don't think u do!
    WOW.

    "Quickly now
    Make a wish
    That all thats broken
    Can be fixed"

    ^this reminded me of how i always wish at 11:11. and i always wish for the bad things in my life to get better. to be fixed. i loved it and could relate to this in so many ways.

    the flow of this was amazing and i liked the style. i'm also a big fan of this quote...

    "Hearts will never be practical until they are made unbreakable."-Wizard of Oz

    5/5!
    (this is going in my favourites) :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwwww cute xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by yaneris

    I love your poems..it toched me yr poem is tight bro!