Oh very heavy, great work xxxxx

I loved how dark this was and the story you told was intriguing and left me wanting more. The flow was just flawless making for an enjoyable read and I loved how your wrote everything so naturally where nothing seemed forced. The ending was perfect and a great way to completed this wonderfully haunting piece. Well done *5/5*

I really liked you poem it was fary tuching and how much thought you put in it i hope you can make more really great job!