I really really despise being speechless. like, it's worse than anything for a girl whose name means, "talkative". but you did it...again.....darn you.

Even the bowl of cherries she left in her kitchen
Is worth their regard, a bowl they might have painted
In a rush of sympathy for objects small and frail

^ all i can even think...is god. what a beautiful...gah! darn you mike...i can't even think straight it's so amazing..that last line..we're all so small and frail...or i am...god.

just...bleh. no words. you said them all....wonderful

A deep thought provoking poem, well written
5/5

I founded me words, mike!! lol. i reallyy just thought i should leave a real comment...instead of me blabbing like i am right now so here we go.

Insubstantial and insignificant, or a rush of awe
At how ready the cherries and the bowl appear
To give themselves to the light that's left them,
With nothing held in reserve for a better day.

^ wow. honestly, i love how in this poem you zoomed into so many little details that can be taken so many ways...

the vocabulary and the flow of this poem are both amazing. i love the fact that i didn't get an entirely sad poem from you this time! lol. but ya....sorry for the double comment. lol.

gab

I absolutely adored this piece, utterly amazing and gobsmacked at all that imagery you put in.

It's beautiful, write something else man! You've been so quiet lately! =P

Lizzy,
xxx

Very nicely written piece.

If I want the company of the nonexistent,
I'm better off with the crowd of shadows who lost
Their only chance to escape the darkness
On the night I happened to be conceived

Self reflection is sometimes a very painful thing to do. I love the emotion you have put into this piece.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Wow once again i am speechless i dont kno wat to say except you got a talent and the way you use ur words jus makes a person already fall in love with you lol
Loved the poem....Fantastic...Beautiful....Job!!!
5/5

Very talented piece of writing. I always like thoughtful poems and this is one of them... truly amazing!

Lot's of praise from me for this poem, really great. You can make a living out of this.

A veryy nice poem. WELL DONE
[5.5]

Great work 5/5

I loved it Mike! Nicly done =)

Victoria ;)

The imagery was exceptional
but the vocabulary you used and the way you put your words together portrayed such a clear picture, and the underlying message could be taken in so many ways.
Impressive!

5/5