Whispering his words I heard a voice sing
Sshh, hear it ring

bulit this one once more to make it in proper sentence.. its nice to read your poem. its cute 5/5

I loved how it seems like, when you first read it, that you dive straight in. Hooked me at the first line. :) So relate able and the emotions feel very strong.

Close your eyes and feel the words I write
Because I want to make it just right
With you by my side I feel able
With your soothing touch, you still me stable
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Is my favorite stanza. I've found myself on one a many nights trying to pen the perfect poem for how I feel. :)
5/5