Comments : The Heart of the Ocean

  • 13 years ago

    by robin milford

    Good job could be longer

  • 12 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "She takes a step over the edge,
    He holds her back,
    Making her feel worth something,"

    Perfect imagery to start off a poem. This makes readers want to continue reading this poem. This was very well written. Though it was short.

    "She says he's crazy,
    He saves her life,
    She saves his,"

    This is sweet and honest.

    "Looking straight into his eyes,
    She sees the care,
    Unaware of what is to come,
    He will save her from many things,
    But not his love. "

    This is a good ending to this poem. its sweet, soft and innocent. Its a good poem keep it up. You should check out some of my poetry sometime keep up the good work :D

  • 12 years ago

    by she

    Oh,dang, deep poem, like the ending, i didnt expect it.
    buetifull yet sad poem
    another 5/5