Amazing amazing work.beautifully written everything was decribes so well, although yes the poem did look long at the begin, your words sucked me into the poem, and i couhgt myself wishing that it would never end. a line that really caught me was

My world revolves around infinite thoughts of you and I still feel as if gravity is pulling me down. Or is that you?

there was something about this couple of lines that grabbed me and made me think. of course the whole poem itself makes you really wonder. you did a lovly job with this piece----tara

Beautifully written, the words flowed perfectly. Like paint is etched into a painting your words are etched into the poem.

"You did always swear to give me everything I wanted, didn't you? And I never did peg you for a liar, so why start after two years?"

That is what stuck out to me. Because it says how people lie even if they swear or promise. Lovely, 5/5

This is such a lovely poem.

You. You. You. My world revolves around infinite thoughts of you and I still feel as if gravity is pulling me down. Or is that you? Are you the one dragging me down to me knees, or is my imagination playing tricks on me? Because this world is losing me in the dust and the rain is covering everything up. And I thought you'd be here to take my hand and pull me through, but you're not... and I can't deal with that.

*This was so beautiful, so heartfelt..It had a very good imagery.*

Great JoB!

Best wishes,

Sarah A.