"Angels will sing of this tragedy,
of how I messed it up,
a moment of insecurity,
when will this ever stop?"
=> This is awesome!!!

"find me in the darkest cave,
and save me once again,
when can I be as brave,
my dreams will never end.

open up your heart for me,
and let me mend and let me sooth,
I'll kiss away and make you free,
your skin can feel so smooth."
=> This soooooooo beautifully written. Honestly, you are amazing poet. xxx I really love the work you have been written recently. For God's sake, please use your talent more because you are blessed to have one. Keep on writing! :)

This is a really good poem, mixed with confused emotions, but solid need. It's interesting to read--you cover everything and make me feel as if I know exactly how you/the person in the poem is feeling. Another great job.