1 i love the quote at the end...i love how you're quoting now.
2 now i'm afraid to turn off my cpu for fear of darkness....great.

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What is it, dear reader?
Depression? Regret?
I can see the darkness coming
Cause it's not here yet

^ this stanza really just...scares me. after tonight...if that isn't the darkness...then, well, that battle is lost...but i'll fight it anyway...

once again...great job, Mr. Tomato.

I luv who it gives u a sense of iry and confusion then hits u with an explination at the end. 5/5

Oh i liek this one, love the quote at the end toox great work xx