Edit:
I think you mean save my soul.
I think you mean I need you so bad (which should be badly).
Other than that just work on capitalization and punctuation. The usual.

Response:
It was okay. It's always hard to tell if a song is good without hearing it way it was intended, so who knows, I could like it more than I think. I think you said oh lord a bit much.

Rating:
It would rate it between a two and a three. Take your pick.

I loved your song Travis!!!!... Im srry you were sad.. It can get really hard in life.. nd praying to god.. can be your only salvation sometimes.. nd I pray too.. cuz life isnt alway far.. But it makes us so much stronger.. ^-^

Loved the song Travis....sorry you have been sad lately hope things will get better for you but ur strong and you'll make it through it.
5/5

Wow am impressed, " i open my heart to you, i am looking for answers, i feel so afraid, i am just in this parade of darkness show me the way " this really caught my eye, i remember making such a prayer when i was lost in sin.. Really nice, good work and hope all goes well for You.. Keep it up.

Wow am impressed, " i open my heart to you, i am looking for answers, i feel so afraid, i am just in this parade of darkness show me the way " this really caught my eye, i remember making such a prayer when i was lost in sin.. Really nice, good work and hope all goes well for You.. Keep it up.

Im not really religious but it eases everyone i think to ask for help from someone...i think theres a god everywhere even w.o a religion you know..god in each of us or something : )...anyway great poem im sorry you were down tho : c

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