Comments : Once in a lifetime

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Awe`, :). I liked it. People can tell it was something you wrote from within. :) Great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awwww...that's cute, I like it. very good write. keep it up :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Stinapoo1991

    5/5 great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Absolutely beautiful. you are a poet

  • 16 years ago

    by Martine

    *Sweeet*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Lovely poem,

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Mommi

    Girl did he listen? I'm still trying to make my man see that far. I like how you mare your words flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meaghan

    Your writing is amazing. i totally understand where you come from. keep up the great writing.
    meaghan

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenxheartedxangel

    Love it! Kinda reminds me of me and my guy! I miss him =( 5/5