Comments : Tearing us apart

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. julia, i absolutely love it. it's so full of emotion and pain...wow.

    I just want to help you make this right
    I can help you, isn't that what your asking from me?

    ^ i really can relate to these lines..it's like they're crying for help, but won't take it. and that's so frustrating, i know. and you feel helpless...

    i also loved the last stanza...it's just....a very powerful way to end it.

    great job, loves.

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight

    It's so amazing and powerful. it's like... hard to explain... i can relate to it so much and in so many different aspects. it's awesome.