Umm again it was ok not the best and yes everyone know saddness will make them stronger life can make you stronger..but some ppl it makes them weak! i really think if you used bigger words it would be alot better

I liked this poem, can relate to it in a way. so good job, i give it a 5!

I wrote this on a Saturday night when all my friends were asking me to come drink with them. I was too down, i usually never edit my work, i only write when I’m either crying, really sad, thinking about someone until I’m black n blue, or depressed.. I guess I could prolly think more clearly when I’m none of the above. And possibly edit my work if it’s choppy because of the circumstances. Thanks for your impute. I’ll keep that in-mind for my future work.