Comments : The serenity of the sea

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful write....
    "For you Id shed a thousand tears and a thousand smiles as well.And if I could Id not think twice of saving you from hell.

    but now its far to late , youve run away from me , now your only memory is the serenity of the sea. "
    ^^These last lines are so wonderfull... ver hearfelt as well...

    "For you Id shed a thousand tears and a thousand smiles as well"....
    ^^its so sweet... i loved it.

    I like the title also...

    very good job..