Comments : Why?

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Omg! i can relate in so many ways it is totally unreal. i love the raw emotion you put into this, it really makes me think about global warming and climate change. I'm walking to school tomorrow. lol. nice write. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    Well Written , and the way you ask such real questions --- A realistic poem .. if I ask Why are we going far from God? ... probably it may answer some of the questions which have been asked in ur poem
    Cheers
    Biya

  • 13 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Your point was very well read throughout this poem, though i would love to have seen more rhymes i wouldnt dare change it for the world - it was a very refreshing read, one i havnt come accross in a very long time on this site or in this club - no offence intended. Well done.

    IBE