Comments : How Could You

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt L

    Love the poem

    i know a guy who does the same kinda thing, they are not worth nothing...not much going on in there heads

    keep writing

    matt

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenxheartedxangel

    Love the peom! Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Wow i love this.
    its great.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    How can you act,
    Like we've never loved at all?
    While I'm at home wishing you'd call.

    felt that : /
    listen to the song "how could you" by mario
    youll love it!

    5/5 <33

  • 15 years ago

    by emily

    A complete stranger
    Now gets to hold my whole world.

    I love that part. excellent writing. I like your use of repetition :) Beautiful job!

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this poem is really good i love it

    you are a really great poet
    better then me

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Ugh, I have totally felt this way before! It sucks! Actually, that is quite the understatement lol

    But on the bright side, I love this poem! I especially love the first stanza. The emotion is so strong how you've written it.

    I think it is incredible that you can express yourself so well. Not too many people can do it this well so feel special!

    haha Poems like this are why i love this website!

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Hopelessly Devoted to You

    Really nice, I liked this one a lot! Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Sad yet a beautiful poem :) <3