God. *cries* wow....you're right. it's so..bittersweet, jesse. it's just....darn you.

Happy is a high
Higher to fall
Can't let this high place
Can't get this tall

^ LOL. that sounds like me, you dork. i love it though.

Another broken puzzle piece
That won't fit anywhere
In this world of pretty puzzles
My piece won't make a pair

^ mm...pretty puzzles are always more than they seem, jesse. always. no puzzle ever fits together perfectly..there's always a few spaces.

Well, those raindrops are screaming
Or is that pretend?
Just like the rainy street
When will it end?

^ rain...hmm...we never get that here. i can't blame the wet on my face on the rain when it's no there...

Walk in rain
Too wet to dance
Smiles and sunshine
A second chance?

^ the last stanza was definitely the best. i love the rain...but that burst of sunshine is always needed to make you appreciate it. it's like a glimmer of hope..which is what i want to see in you jesse...we all do.

the quote at the bottome was just....
great job, jesse.

~Forget the poem
I want to walk in the rain
No, those aren't tears
The raindrops I blame~
this is my favorite line in the whole poem. ur choice of words and flow is just amazing! and i luv the quote at the bottom, but i think u need 2 read that quote a few more times until u realize it explains u perfectly. u r stronger then u think. 5/5
xoxox
~me~

Wow. i love this one. especially the last three stanzas definitely. great. keep on writing. i love it. 5/5