Comments : Invisible tears

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    I don't exactly understand what happened to this girl and why she's said but nevertheless its a beautiful poem.

    "Invisible raindrops are falling from her heart
    they match her invisible little tears
    they play a beautiful song for the world
    a melody that echoes with her fears"
    ^this stanza was unbelievable! well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Little black box
    rain drops,
    hahah gabby there is so many secret references that nobody will even know about if they havent read my poems b4 urs. thats SO cool. like a treasure hunt

    btw great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great job, really well written xx