hey
This a 5 star poem... Loved it, but I wish you go smoother, but then everyone has his own style aint it right? ;)
I think NOTHING should get in the way of a good friendship, not even love. Nosy Fatimah, okay, I know I wouldn't allow it... Friendship will last forever ;)
So I wish you behave yourselves and work it out, and Jess allow me to say >> keep nagging till Paul smiles << ;)
Good Luck!