I LOVE the way youve written it in standard text form. i dont know why but it makes it more interesting. plus youve used words that are not cliche, which is definitely refreshing

Great poem really enjoyed reading it. keep it up.

This is a great poem.

Absoulutely Awesome!

Excellent flow 5/5 amazing!!

I LOVE THIS AND ITS FLOW !

I must say this made me chuckle Abit but only because it has happened to me and alot though remember two wrongs don't make a right.

Take care, Em