Luanne...I remember this one fromlast summer...LOL. You did a great job on this Rap.
Love Cindy

I don't like rap music at all, but I would've loved to hear a beat with this. It's ver emotional for a rap piece.
Sorry this comment isn't going to be "helpful" or long, but I didn't find anything wrong with this.
"rid your heart, of hate
wise up, get it straight"
^ my favorite part.
This seems to give hope. Like someone reading this could finally realize that they can start over, that they don't need to feel the bad way that they do.
And I like that. =)

5/5

Luanne,

Nice rap, it has our club name in it!
It has a very postive message also...

Big hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

"oh innocent child
in a world gone wild"

This was the part that really stuck out to me.. it is so true and is so much like me right now.. growing up everything seems so innocent and the world you meet is so crazy and wild.. you did an amazing job with this and i love it.. i love rap music too so it is muy perfecto for me!
5/5

Great rap. It has a lot of meaning to it.

5/5
~Elizabeth

THiS RAP GOEs HARD
N iT SO VERY TRUE i SEE iT EVERYDAY ON THA BLOCC!
N iN MY LiFE..MUCH LUV 2 YA!