That was deep lol it had a good meaning to it. i liked the line something like time flies by or something.. man we have no idea how fast time really goes. well nice write keep it up 5/5 always
Kate~

This is truly powerful. The whole message is portrayed excellently and your choice of words is also amazing. This poem has very natural, great flow from the beginning to the end. Refreshing read.
Keep up!

Strong, powerful poem. You did a great job expressing your thoughts. And the idea was really nice and not original.
Good job.

Its good