Fabulous job again Big Hersh, keep writin n TC...

"you old enough to get up
and make sure you room is rearranged"

i think those lines are great

one suggestion: "when there was lots of laughter"

"was" in singular" and "lots" is plural, so if you just match them both it would sound better

thanks for sharing your poetry, 5/5

This is fantastic poem! Keep it up!